Professional Developmental Editing Services
In-depth edits and feedback that strenghtens your story structure, deepens your characters and elevates your story.
What You'll Get
Inline Edits
Detailed suggestions of edits given through inline comments to help you improve your story line by line.
Editorial Report
A detailed editorial report about the foundations and developmental aspects of yur manuscript
Chapter Feedback
Comprehensive review of chapters indivdually about their strenghts, wekaness and contributions
Action Plan
Receive clear, constructive steps to enhance your manuscript and prepare it for the next stage.
Clarity on structure, plot, pacing, scenes and overall story arc to create a more enjoyable and engagaing reading experience for your target audience
Analysis and review of plot holes, conflicts, stakes, cause and effect to create a well-structured story that flows engages and keeps readers turning.
In-depth review of your worldbuilding throughout to ensure a consistent, believable and immersive experiense for your readers
An assessment of how your book stacks up against current genre expectations and reader preferences.
Big Picture Insight
Plot & Structure
Worldbuilding
Genre specific edits
Service Details
In-depth analysis and review of your character's arcs, development, roles, introduction, personality, flaws, stregnths and actions to create stronger characters your readers will connect with
Identifying slow spots, info dumps, and pacing imbalances, areas that are mundane, boring, or repetitive and areas that can benefit from more detail.
Reviewing POV choices, consistency and narrative effectivess accroding to the manuscript
Strengthening thematic alignment and deeper story impact for a long-lasting affect on the reader.
Character Development
Pacing Review
Narrative Flow
Themes and Meaning
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Submit your manuscript
Share your manuscript and your goals/intentions for it.
How it works
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In-depth review
The book goes through 2 rounds of in-depth reading while I take notes for the report.
You get the feedback
You receive a detailed editorial report and the document with inline edits.
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We talk and Discuss
We can talk over email about your book or discuss anything regarding it.
Let’s give your story the care it deserves
I believe that every manuscript holds a unique voice. Reach out to get started and let’s begin the journey of strengthening your narrative together.